Voted For: CA$per

MaD_KnighT

You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/
U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/
^1st line's bleh, second was good

Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse//
Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse//
hmmm, decent decent

Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/
All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/
hehe,this one was funny

Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran//
Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan//
^good closer

Okay battle here! You started off quite hesitating in my opinion, not that funny or hardhitting punches at the start but afterwards you picked up the pace real well. The flow was good, vocabulary was okay, might be improved a little but nothing too bad though. Structure was okay, personals were nice and punches were good. Not always too creative maybe but you had some funny stuff in there. Overall good verse...


CA$per

u think u can win son,?u better step up your game.....
imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name....
^hehe,good opener

you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz....
imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics
okay okay

your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen.........
its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine...
decent

why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies.....
and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy...
funny shit

u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill....
u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill......
lmao, dope closer

Nice verse, you stayed consistent with the punches which were creative and hardhitting most of the time. I laughed at some of those, personals were okay and the structure was cool. The vocab might be a little better but that didn't affect the content of your verse. I was feeling your flow, just try to get some more personals and higher vocab next time maybe but I definitely enjoyed reading your verse.

In the end my vote goes to CA$per because he stayed consistent with the punches, started off with dope stuff right away unlike MaD_KnighT who had to warm up first

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