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Old 04-07-05, 07:33 PM   #27
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nice drop...here's wut stood out to me

-the flow was decent enough...it fell off in areas but nobody's perfect
-there wasnt much raw emotion but everything that was said made sense
-the hook was fire...use that in a audio or somethin
-"Like a nerdy geeks grades my love for you is progressin": not a good comparrison to be honest....try somethin like " emotions take over when i see you i cant control my affection"...yet again it did make sense tho.

overall i give this one a 6/10 keep droppin and RTF in my OM called Dream or reality.1.
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