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Old 04-09-05, 02:21 AM   #24
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
Posts: 7,092
From: Chitown
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If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
ehhhhh.... metas ok
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
this was alot better.....
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
not avery good bar.... but decent
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
haha nice close, ur setup i actually liked better than the 2nd line

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
blah opener..... kinda stupid
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
haha.... but i unno if this is a fake personal, but kinda funny
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
weak....... 7 days weak
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
kinda funny, hit harder than most

kinda close battle...... Li only had two good bars, while Hotshh had ALL decent bars pretty much..... so i gotta give this to consistencey.....

V/Hotshh!
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