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Damn this was a nice peice...
i really liked it alot...
You had lots of emotions in your peice...
Nice imagery... good feeling , you really made the reader want to read more and more..
you had nice wordplay, good vocab , overall it was a nice peice...
couldnt have expected any less from you , nice job Fam ...pz
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