work on your structure... up your vocab...your verse's are way to short. and lack emotion i think.. i understand what your saying but say what you are saying in a more educated way ..... but anyways lol i like my blonde girls....


o yea make your chorus longer right now its to simple make it a little more complex and what kind of heavy metal? like screamoish ,educated metal...etc?

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