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04-11-05, 07:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Barbie Doll
IP: A190 A400
It's a song for my heavy metal band, but check it out anyways...
Barbie Doll (Verse 1) Look at you/ Smiling like you care/ But I see past your preppy wardrobe/ Your bitch blonde hair/ Perfectly manicured; a push-up bra/ So slutty in your way/ But once they realize the truth/ Will things still be okay? (Chorus) You're not a fucking barbie doll/ Not a fucking barbie doll/ Not a fucking barbie doll/ You're not a fucking barbie doll (Verse 2) Look at me/ Disgusted by your veiw/ Changing your life just to please them/ But I know the truth/ It's killing you, isn't it?/ I sense the pain you hide/ And you'll know wut I mean/ Once they leave you far behind (Chorusx1) (Outro) No one's perfect/ Is it worth it?/ Putting yourself thru this pain?/ You try to please them/ Whay don't you leave them?/ Before they put your heart to shame?
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04-11-05, 07:17 PM | #2 | |||||||
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No one is reading this, so I guess I'll have to up it...
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04-11-05, 07:31 PM | #3 | |||||||
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I'm upping once again................
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04-11-05, 07:32 PM | #4 | |||||||
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work on your structure... up your vocab...your verse's are way to short. and lack emotion i think.. i understand what your saying but say what you are saying in a more educated way ..... but anyways lol i like my blonde girls....
o yea make your chorus longer right now its to simple make it a little more complex and what kind of heavy metal? like screamoish ,educated metal...etc?
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04-11-05, 07:36 PM | #5 | |||||||
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They're not too short, they're heavy metal... if it was any longer, it'd b like, 10 minutes long.... but thatnx for at least posting something....
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04-11-05, 07:44 PM | #6 | |||||||
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upping once again........
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04-11-05, 07:48 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 342A DA98
Well, yeah. It was cool. Im into rock myself so I know what you mean.. why dont you like, do sound click and let us hear it. You might get a better responce...
Sweft
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04-11-05, 07:56 PM | #8 | ||||
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Oh, and I didnt come with no bull shit and still said somethin' positive even though you felt it was okay to call me a wigger. But I skate board and I like 3 days grace smile, smile empty soul, the used, trapt, sum 41, and I been to hella concerts and not one rap..
But Im not gonna hate on you, cuz I see you just judge a book by the cover. Whatever.. I liked your song or whatever just let us actually hear it. www.soundclick.com Sweft
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04-11-05, 07:57 PM | #9 | |||
Get Stomped.
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IP: D9DE DE5D
yeye good stuff ma im so confused your frineds r fucking with me on aim im gonna kill them
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04-11-05, 11:25 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: CFFD F596
yo this the wrong site yo we no heavy metal rockers mayn but aight i guess i really aint inta the screamin and that but atleast ya got ur shit across the net which shows me u tryin ta make it
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04-19-05, 06:54 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: A190 A400
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