KING SOLO.
I Built Up My Wack Immunity..That’s Why Ure Lines Got No Effect…
No Stallin I’ll Get To Da Point..Why Battle U Aint Getting No Respect…
^^GUD SETUP LINE..NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH
Never Say Anything Worthwhile..Ain’t Gonna Be A Link-In This Park…
Deliver Shots To Cut Ya..Solo Smellin Blood Like Great White Sharks…
^^META...BUT NO PUNCH HERE
Bitch Even Failed At Suckin..Put To Tha Gutter Like Poor-Paid-Hoes…
This An RV Battle..And Yet U Singin & Dancin Like Broadway-Shows…
^^GUD WORDPLAY...KINDA WEAK PUNCH
Solo Self-Glorifies..I Got Lyrics Flowin Like Blood From A Broken Nose…
Feelin Like Ludacris..Keep Facin Too Many Rookies, Not Enough Pros…
^^^DECENT
PM’ed Me For 16 Lines..Must Have Ya Solo Pre-Writ Script Done…
But U Ain’t Getting A Win..Just Like Sex Never Comes For A Nun…
^^^DECENT AGAIN
Effect Mistaken For Havin Fleas..U Constantly Scratchin Like DJ’s…
This Ho The Lyrical Dick Sucker..PM’s Vets And Starts Offerin BJ’s…
^^^NAH...THIS KINDA CONCEPTS PLAYED
Dawg U Lose..U Can’t Take This HeavyWeight Like Fat Bitches Legs…
I Crack Shit And Then Splatter Shit..Beatin U Easy Like Breakin Eggs…
^^^WORDPLAY NICE...AGAIN PUNCH LACKING
Like The Bombin Of Pearl Harbour..This Battle Will Live In Infamy…
Effect Brought His Pre-Writ..And Still FailedTo Bring A Diss-To-Me…
^^^OK.CLOSER
OVERALL, SUM NICE METAS & WORDPLAY WAS NICE TOO.GUD STRUCTURE, NICE FLOW.PUNCHES WERNT THAT HOT, COUPLE PLAYED CONCEPTS...SEEN A LOT BETA FROM U..BUT U DID ENOUGH TO TAKE THIS EASY.
EFFECT
yo im spittin against a handy cap that can't even rap
i don't wanna just defeat ya i wanna murder u wid gats
^^NO PUNCH...GUN LINES ARE MORE PLAYED THAN CARD GAMES
my shit crushes the shit out of you ya like feathers
i'll rip into you bitch and you'll have 2 tape urself together
^^BLAH...WEAK PUNCH, ...
stupid mutha fucker your dad should have worn a rubber
nobody knew u'd be gay ur like jim carry out of dumb n dumber
^^^WEAK....NO PUNCH HERE
girls run away from ur ass your skills are just straight trash
think you can whoop my ass when urs is gettin a thrash
^^^KINDA FUNNY..BUT ONLY DUE TO ITS WACKNESS.LOL
he an't even got cash just a poor boy whos going no where
solo if you died not even a single person would even care
^^BIT BETA...NOT GREAT
I give you scars your bars are gettin knocked back hard
anybody would think ya retard i'll give ya mind stars
^^BASIC, BASIC..
as i smash into ya and landing you all the way in mars
^^^REST OF BAR?
i'll reach into ya and leave ya soul dead and demolished
bitch go to college your rhymes need to be more polished
^^DINDT MAKE SENSE..OK IDEA BUT U RUINED IT..
I'll cremate your ass you know you can't hold my weight
straight up my skill will leave u killed and have u ass raped
^^AGAIN BLAH
fuckin faggot I seem to always attract these gay rappers
but later get embaressed when i make em fools afterwoulds
^^NO....WEAK
OVERALL- CONCEPTS TOO SIMPLE, U NEED WORDPLAY & PUNCHES, SUM OF YA LINES DFNT MAKE SENSE, NO PERSONALS,
STRUC & FLOW O.K...THATS ABOUT IT
PLEASE RETURN ONE....
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