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Old 04-12-05, 03:36 PM   #8
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Voted For: K.SoLo

KING SOLO

I LIKED YOUR SHIT SOLO, FLOWS ON POINT...NICE CREATIVE LINES WITH GUD WORDPLAY & METAS IN THERE..STRUCS ON POINT.ONLY THING ID SAY IS ADD SOME PERSONALS IN YA SPITS, THEY LACKING. OTHER THAT THAT YOU CAME PRETTY DECENT.KEEP IT UP.

ESCOLAYDE
KINDA BASIC VERSE...STRUC WAS A LIL OFF, WHICH THREW THE FLOW A LIL..U GOT SOME METAS IN THERE, BUT NOTIN REALLY HITTIN. U NEED PERSONALS TOO..FUCK METAS & WORDPLAY..MAKE YA PERSONALS FIRST THEN TRY MAKE EM CREATIVE..YA BARS LACKING COZ THE PUNCHES WEAK ALTHOUGH THE CONTENTS AIIGHT IN YA SETUP LINES...

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