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Old 04-13-05, 10:15 PM   #5
Tmka"D"
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From: B-more, Murdaland
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aight this is my beat right here...i wrote to this shit before...didn't think i'd be on this site again...lol...anyway

1st- lyrics were good on here...flow was pretty solid...need to work on ya breathe control on parts tho...delivery i was feeling...

2nd cat- flow was nice on this joint...good rhyme scheme....delivery was coo yamean...lyrics were good for this track right here...

3rd- aight fam...gotta gutter voice...sound like this dude i know...flow was coo on this joint pretty solid...like your delivery...lyrics were also felt...

i fucks with the chorus...overall this was a good joint right here. 1
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