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04-12-05, 09:07 PM | #1 | ||
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Motivated
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yea i got a new track out its been awhile....its called Motivated...its concept is basically the shit that keeps us motivated to keep on rappin and things that motivate us in everyday life..and by us i mean..Me LethalGK and Triple_N...so yall just chill listen to the vibe of the track...and leave some feed....
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm oo yea i left feed on Blaze track and E and Tha Q's track...
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04-12-05, 09:22 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
*listening*.....
beat is nice..... Dias flow is on point...im feelin it...lyrically...im liking this...pretty dope verse from you.... Hook is nice.... Lethal GK....i think his voice is fittin the beat well...his flow is pretty nice....lyrically nice Triple N....flow good...again a nice verse lyrically and flow is good... i really cant find anything wrong with this joint here...im definitely feelin this...itll prolly go in the disc changer...im definitely feelin this...nice drop....sorry i couldnt give you no constructive criticism...i honestly cant find anything wrong with it
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04-13-05, 04:21 PM | #3 | ||
Light Weight
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IP:
man what the fuck upp
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04-13-05, 05:55 PM | #4 | |
20/20 VisioN
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IP:
diabloic, quality is ight, dubs a lil loud i think
lyrics are ight, chorus is good, it flows well and shit GK voice seems diff than normal, higher pitch lol, lyrics are straight, flow is good shorter it seems than 1st trip good flow and delevery for the beat, good lyrics also, dubs are almost perfect overall good track 8/10
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04-13-05, 10:15 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
aight this is my beat right here...i wrote to this shit before...didn't think i'd be on this site again...lol...anyway
1st- lyrics were good on here...flow was pretty solid...need to work on ya breathe control on parts tho...delivery i was feeling... 2nd cat- flow was nice on this joint...good rhyme scheme....delivery was coo yamean...lyrics were good for this track right here... 3rd- aight fam...gotta gutter voice...sound like this dude i know...flow was coo on this joint pretty solid...like your delivery...lyrics were also felt... i fucks with the chorus...overall this was a good joint right here. 1
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04-14-05, 03:24 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
up son.........................
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04-15-05, 07:16 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
up.............
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04-15-05, 08:18 PM | #8 | ||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP:
Beat is sick.
D - Delivery is good. Flow is good fell off a bit. Lyrics is good. Fuck that chorus is nice. Lethal - Flow is nice. Lyrics are good. Delivery is dope. Quality seems nice too. Trip - Flow and delivery were good. Lyrics good. Quality good. Meh. Can't say too much but it's a pretty nice track IMO. Maybe i'll d/l it to my mp3 player nahmeansons? 8/10
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04-15-05, 08:57 PM | #9 | ||
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IP:
Beat is the sickness. I can't remember who this is, but I heard it before. Diabolic, I can't remember hearin you before, but your flow ain't bad son, I like it. Flow was just barely off in a few spots. Could brush up ya overdubs, they seem a bit off, but other than that - nice verse. yo. Hooks nice. Feelin it. Lethal - I like ya flow man, we gotta get up on somethin one of these days. Nice verse, flow was good. Quality about the same as Diabolics. Feelin it. Trip - You got mad diff sound than every cat out, I like that style. Verse is nice, emotion matches verse nice. Good as usual.
No stand out verse, all three of ya'll came nice. Good looks. Keep droppin - I like all ya'lls stuff. 1
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04-16-05, 12:24 PM | #10 | ||
The Light
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IP:
yea.. word.. my bad dia - aint have time homie.. but shit was crack b.. for real.. shit was nice.. everybody did their thang.. the flow was nice for everybody..Dia tho, ya breathe control was killin about 2 of ya lines.. but that'll come prolly.. but it was straight homie for real.. lethal was a lil cloudy when he started speeding up, but he was strait also.. flow was nice.. triple did his thang - kept his flow the same.. overall this was a good track for real.. the chorus was the attraction on the joint to me.. the verses were straight.. like phenom said, none jumped out more than the others.. but it was a good track..
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04-16-05, 10:26 PM | #11 | ||
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IP:
word good lookin fellas up...
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