Beautiful piece, your approach of the topic was so powerful and strong. You found an excellent balance in your vocab, not too basic and yet not too complex. The imagery was amazing, you managed to paint a great picture of the situation. The emotion was so pure, so raw. Flow was coo as well as structure. I just like how you worded everything, you have a very nice writing style. One of my favo lines was this: "*This is it our final run, rise with thy heart not thy fist*"

Great piece!

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