Emotion- Coo man i felt the Emotion in this verse, str8 up good.
Vocab-Upp your vocab man, so it'll make you verse decent.
Imaginary- YOU had a hella good imaginary my friend keep that up
Concept- I think you should've approach the topic more different, not ZOOM into the story that quick.
But this a good drop, good flow, with good imaginary. Upp your vocab and your emotion A little. But i think you got this battle. G-luck on the polls