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Old 04-16-05, 08:49 AM   #9
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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Your just a tadpoole...... thrown in the midst of Big Fishes
I made this "Punch" miss...because its impolite to hit BITCHES
So if I 'sleep' on this hoe......... than hotshh! is Crazy Tired
Plus her lack of productions the only reason Lady's Fiya'd...(fired)
This skill level you've never Met Before so spit it Better Whore
Cuz it dont take much pressure 2 split 'Dutches with a Metaphor'

vs.

You DOPE? Your name only proves your NARC-olepsy
’cause your finger fell asleep tryna press the “H” key!
9th Degree took ur ego’s life… like u kno-bitch-you-airy!!
respect the Pope, u murder Newbs just to Pet Cemeteries!

ahhhh this was a good battle..... i think Hotshhh took this one, especially with that hittin bitches line...... if that DR line had been true u woulda straight killed it, but i think u still pulled out the victory.... one major issue i had with lady's verse was just the rhyming alone.... example: the TITTIE line and the 2nd to last bar u had..... maybe u had some weird scheme goin on there, but i didnt see it..... there were some decent punches.. and since there is no rule against feedin, i didnt hold it against u, but it seemed like u were tryna cram too much into every line and bar so that took away from any good flow or rhyme scheme....

v/hotshh!
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