yo this some nice shit famz.............

stayed on ya topic....i was feelin it...........gud structure and gud flow...............

ya structure cud use slight work..........and ya vocabs was aight but try not to be too basic all the time..............overall 7/10

drop sum feed on my latest open mic yo............."Rippin Them Open Mic IP's"
.................................................. ......................^^ORIGINAL SHIT^^

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