well since you've been an asshole all morning i wont leave adequate feed ....cheerio

word, i guess i'll leave some feed now....meh, nothing special, i liked the chorus the best....imagery was decent, coulda been better, had nice emotion though....i think your wordplay could be a little better though, but like you said, this is an old piece, seems like it happened to you, so its pretty dope....keep up yo

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