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Old 04-18-05, 09:47 PM   #18
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Voted For: Nelson Mandela

Vote= Mandela
reason being... his verse stood out to more cuz i can relate to it... i was feeling his topic more although neither were that creative. i would've liked to see more of a slave dialect in Mandela's piece that would've given it a touch of Creative Dopeness. as for Stanza i didnt like his whole story telling aspect. i felt he could've been more discriptive mor vivid. his vocab lacked aswell. it would've brought the piece out more.
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