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Old 04-19-05, 05:58 PM   #29
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Voted For: mizz fyre

I'm not going to quote lines...this was fairly one-sided...

mizz fyre- You've got a talent for lead-ins, no doubt about that....your intro connected nicely with the rising actions, nice vocab, but I'm more impressed by your storytelling ability..

Ethnic- Complexity wasn't there, neither was any real kind of story or substance for that matter...even you got to admit you got reamed on this one..
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