Voted For: Daubs

ight close battle... daubs thisa is decent for your first battle good job man imma break it down...

Daubs

Called me out in my own thread,but only if "im not scared"??..*
Bitch you gonna get it now,cuz like the SAS,im always prepared!!
alryyt opener.. no punch really
Ima "shatter" your record, like a brick through glass..**
Called me out like a gansta, but still show no class!!
alryyt couldav been worded better
My punches hit you full in the face, yours barely connect..***
Takes more than battlin 5 newbies......to gain my respect!!
nicee personal decent punch here aswel
Your magik like a magician so u make me see things..****
That jus fake shit, kinda like the skill you bring!!
another nice line pklayed of his name decent closure

ight daubs overall i thought you had some decent shit in ther and some played shit i felt you had no piunches becuz u were more interested in finding the rhye... no biggi though good verse 15/20

Magik

I'ma crush this kid, gangsta? Please, you're nothing bitch!
I'm "so hot like stove tops" you "couldn't touch me with oven mits"
^^ not a very good opener self gloryfication
I'm grippin' the iron, the trey'll speak, make this faker cease
Then watch this hater "sink" like a "kitchen appliance"
^^ nice wordplay but it doesnt rhyme
This man's game's hollow, and it can't stop me dawg
But I will "pop your top" like a "champagne bottle!"
^^ alryyt couldav been wordfed better
You a lame emcee, know better than to play with me
Because ya rhymes "don't make cents" like "broken change machines"
^^ nicee decent closure and a decent punch

ight man u have potential keep doing your thing n u will get somwhere but some of your lines didnt rhyme n u had a self glorification in there which isnt good in a battle... you had a couple of decent punches in there

v/ daubs becuz he had punches and more personals magik only had punches and half his shit didnt rhyme rlly...

rtf on my battle wit U.T.A link is in the sig pz....

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