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Old 04-23-05, 11:22 AM   #30
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Voted For: Stanza

damn....this is a hard one to call................

stanza...........ure shit flowed well playa.......lines seem stretched cuz of BIG text....i still am baffled as to why people do this.........anyway, u stayed on topic all the way through....a lot of feeling and emotion in ya drop.......delivered a sort of imagery to the thoughts n shit....a short topical when put against some i've seen which i like cuz it is too the point and effective....u didnt drag it on tryin to squeeze as much in as possible....ya vocab was nice, a couple of multies in there to....overall 7.5/10

nelson.....another gud drop.....strucutre was aight, not as tight as stanza and that is why his flowed better....u stayed on topic to and i liked ya approach to the topic....ya dropped a nice verse with feelin to.....had similar affect to stanza's with the imagery shit.........ya idea was good, vocab was nice and shit but i jsut think that stanza's flowed better and that is why i enjoyed his that little better...overall 7/10

V/ - stanza

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