Voted For: Armada Da 187

Ca$per.........breakdown for ya verse.............

.....ya shit was aight...the structure was cool most things kept tight like a box...this helped ya flow which went smooth throughout........ya opener was weak and it just seems as though it is mainly filler..........the closer was the same, its like you put no thought into it and dropped some basic shit....in the middle u had better lines but they were still lacking....the vocab was basic and personals were there but really weak...u didnt really get creative on him and drop some hotness....wordplay was at a bare minimum and its like you just dropped a pure weak verse...nuthin that really stood out to me.........overall 5/10

Armada da 187.......breakdown 4 ya verse........

.....damn ya shit was long.......the structure though was nice, most things kept together....ya flowed nice but things became stretched towards the end........explanations at the bottom are a NO! NO! people shud be able to understand ya punches anyway.....if they can't then that means ya punches are wack or the voter is retarded!!! ya opener was an attempted personal i think that didnt come off, it was weak and almost filler like casper........the closer was nice....the personal punch was affective and got a laugh outta me, but it was way stretched........in between you had punches some nice ones hittin good but a lot that were weak and filler....ya vocab was pretty basic to but ya had better wordplay than Casper.......overall 6/10

both y'all need to elevate......harder punches...more complex vocab and wordplay....get mroe creative.....work on structure....armada try not to stretch lines so much.....

V/ - Armada Da 187

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