Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

4 votes = tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-23-05 at 12:21 AM

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Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 11:51 PM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 11:52 PM.

dis is nuttin, im built for this shit

Ca$per, turned into a spirit?� cuz it’s the pussy you wasn’t gettin
You never goin go big in rappin, cuz its hot verses u rnt spittin
Fool , you nuttin but a cracker, like a saltine out the box
Couldn’t be considered dope, if ya body was made of rocks
You mus be trippin, off life, cuz you allergic, to the hot shit
Ya rhymes skills like a rapper bein part of a gothic mosh pit
Its obsured, ya got no game, world upside down, ya wrong
You sexually Impaired, couldn’t touch a pussy even tho you are one!
You like a lil kid sproutin his first pubic hair, u thinking you a man
But ya not, ya jus a lil boy n will remain that way like hmm peter pan
You a cock sucker, A Vet Ducker, a cowardeous mother fucker
Only battle lil newbs to boost ya overall impression, gay clucker
You a scared lil bitch, afraid of what I’ll do to you, Ill show pitty
Its sad when they cook Ca$per to serve as “chicken� at the KFC
Lloyd Banks? G unit wannabe, don’t like Ja ?, fuckin gaybe, plain n simp
Even wit the help of that that tv host XZIBIT you couldn’t be “pimped�
My verses attack ya mug like a plague of locus, make ya ugly ass itch
If you n Tony happened to be gay, he’d wear the pants , cuz u the bitch!
Leader of the elevation, When you havnt elevated yet, J dots on Crack
Like ya name, ya rhymes n punches r Dead and Friendly, elevate that!
Only thing the LL is bringin is fake niggas ,fake rappers, you 2 a tee fool
“You aint on the top…. you all in denial thas why, thugs take shots at you
sittin back claimin you be “Elevatin even the worst�? lien is bad for you health
Cuz that entire line is mad bullshyt, elevatin the worse? but cant elevate yaself?


explanation-

Casper is a ghost he is dead and freindly
clucker - is a chicken
he leads the livin legend elevation crew
xzibit pimps all his peeps on pimp my ride

lyod banks is in g unit-who hates ja rule hince the wanna be line
"rocks" are slang for "dope"

dont get the res ummm dont vote

opener...
aight this dude armada thinks he dope,i even played along..
that was only to help his rep stay up and to prolong....

cause every body knows u wack,drop o.mz everyday....
your shit is plain and boring,like a when a man goes to ballet
hung off my nuts in mob,but i knew yer rapz were broken...
u as wack as mob was,you should get that forum re-opened.
and gangsta tha only thing u smokin is mushroom heads...
lyrically you come weaker than vanilla ice with dreads..
fuck this chumps bitch made,u be fam and then leave....
i knew when we first signed u as a raper it was hard to believe

closer...
word of advise dogg,start your own crew....
then you can recruit people as wack as you....
and i aint even phased,cause your shit is that bad...
u bring heat? when yo mom sik mabe tha heat pad....

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ight les get this battle voted on upppppppppppinnnnn

up to tha top...........................................

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

wow.......nice.....everybody has they days.......And Armada keep doing ya thang homie. U sick wit it.....And Ca$per u did u thang too......homie just had more punch lines and some nice ones too... Both of yall keep doing yall thang

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thx for the vote..... coulda been a lil more explained but u did say i got it due to punches so thas the explanation


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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Ca$per.........breakdown for ya verse.............

.....ya shit was aight...the structure was cool most things kept tight like a box...this helped ya flow which went smooth throughout........ya opener was weak and it just seems as though it is mainly filler..........the closer was the same, its like you put no thought into it and dropped some basic shit....in the middle u had better lines but they were still lacking....the vocab was basic and personals were there but really weak...u didnt really get creative on him and drop some hotness....wordplay was at a bare minimum and its like you just dropped a pure weak verse...nuthin that really stood out to me.........overall 5/10

Armada da 187.......breakdown 4 ya verse........

.....damn ya shit was long.......the structure though was nice, most things kept together....ya flowed nice but things became stretched towards the end........explanations at the bottom are a NO! NO! people shud be able to understand ya punches anyway.....if they can't then that means ya punches are wack or the voter is retarded!!! ya opener was an attempted personal i think that didnt come off, it was weak and almost filler like casper........the closer was nice....the personal punch was affective and got a laugh outta me, but it was way stretched........in between you had punches some nice ones hittin good but a lot that were weak and filler....ya vocab was pretty basic to but ya had better wordplay than Casper.......overall 6/10

both y'all need to elevate......harder punches...more complex vocab and wordplay....get mroe creative.....work on structure....armada try not to stretch lines so much.....

V/ - Armada Da 187

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

ight armader u owned him easy...

this is a 1 sided battle here... casper u need to work on your punches it seemed like u was focusing on the rhymes more man... it flowed well but u had weak punches aand no perosnals... you shouldav set a line limit coz that wasnt fair armarda near enough doubled your lines which doubled your skill... armada not bad verse vocab was there, some decent punches and your structure was pretty good... the only thing i could see wrong with your is tht it was too long to read n ppl will get bored of reading it so try n do a set line limit its alot fairer then...

armada got this becuz he had better punches and better vocab.. all in all he has better skill.... keep elevatin pz

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Voted For: CA$per

v/casper
imo casper took this one....he kept it short sweet simple yet powerful...he got right to the point the punches were not all that creative but they hit harder than armadas imo.....ur structure was on point....thats why u get my vote
armada-to me u kind of like played around with ur verse and didnt really get out what u were trying to say..if u woulda got more precise wit ur verse u woulda took dis 1......but u didnt so i give my vote to the ghost

rtf damnit
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...10&page=3&pp=15

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to the top wit dis... one more for the win fams. uppppiiiiiiinnnnn

I think ca$ guna take this with his closer. Tha rest needs some work, but Armada is wack, I have no doubts in my mind about this win. Armada, why you be writing stories and shit....lmao...and it was still weak...

*oh, btw. Fuck no I didn't read all your lines, I read tha first 8 and gave up...* lmao