1st verse prolly wouldve been better if i couldve followed the flow but
the structure killed any chance of that,"switch it up maybe"
the rest was quite stretched, but had decent content, vocab was above
average ,......i can see you got some skill but the lines are crazy long
maybe try n fix that a little...overall it was decent, stay up man

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!