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IP:
Your Lines Were Pretty Stretched To Start Off..
Your Structure Was Off, Try To Shorten Up, Your Bars,
Match The Lines Up...Nice Imagery , And Good Feeling
Your Vocab Was Good , Well Above What Others Have Done...
Wordplay Was Good, Your Had A Good Concept, You Really Grabbed ...
The Concept, Overall Keep it up, Try To Shortten Up Your Lines ,
And Match Up Your Bars, Keep it up
And Drop A Link Or This Will Be Closed
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