Voted For: Stanza

meh, i liked stanza's verse more....i liked his angle at the topic better, yours was good nels, but i felt you put most of your verse into capturing emotion, not imagery, and stanza did both pretty well.....so im giving it to him.......nels, you had some nice multies though, structure was off though, stanza, not a bad, short verse, enjoyed it, keep up

/stanxza

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