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Drop A Link Or This Will Be Closed
About the peice.. this was an okay piece
Nice job to both , you both had
nice emotions , and good imagery...
Both had some nice feeling in there drop
Nice drop Kesse... you had lots of emotions..
good feeling .. your wordplay was blah, elevate alittle on that
One , nice drop you had some nice emotions,
overall keep it up both , ..nice topic,
both did a nice job, just elevate on wordplay, and vocab,
and try use alittle more feeling , in your drop
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