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Old 04-28-05, 04:34 PM   #9
Verbal
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This was feedback posted for Big City

IP:

You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
Set-up was eh, but punch was funny...
No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Eh.......not feeling it...
Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
Nice....
you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............
With *fully Loaded-Guns*
Played concept, but good closer..

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
Ha....nice connection, I'm still laughing about those semi-mutton chops..
you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
OK...
ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
Played concept, but aight...
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
Eh....so-so..
how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
Hah...alright
you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
OK.......
aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
Played....
u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
Played...

Some played shit, but both of you brought some good lines..
Don't have enough posts to throw a vote yet, but this was a good battle, I'm upping it so peeps can get a look..
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