Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza's verse.
You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener
No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here
Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me
you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............
With *fully Loaded-Guns*
This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him
Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion
Big City's verse
stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it
you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch
ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice
how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
ehh. This was wack to me. No hate
you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you
aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent
u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
Ok ender. But still a lil stretched.
Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b]
Nice battle.
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