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Old 04-30-05, 02:28 AM   #5
O.V.Dose
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beat is pretty good, quality on the vocals needs to be better...it just ruins the song, i can tell what you were talking about with the in and out effect, delivery was pretty good, flow was aiight...it seemed off only on a couple parts. i was feelin the lyrics for the most part cause it seemed like the type of song i would write haha. but its too short, i hope you plan on makin it longer. if you fixed the vocals and made it longer i would probably listen to it
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