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Old 04-29-05, 06:06 PM   #1
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Wake UP! cant sleep on me 4eva... lol jump on track

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yup yup. i told ya'll i would drop a new one with some knowledge today... well, i whipped up a quick lil verse n chorus. its got a good concept if u listen to lyrics and the flow is happnin too. peep it up n leave links in ya feed ill get atcha! o, btw, once again my vocals got messed up a lil. dv eq'd for me and i think he put a wierd effect on it accidentally, it kinda sways in and out of the speakers, i dunno makes a wierd effect tho. if n e one wanna volenteer to eq my vocals the quality should be better.

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Old 04-29-05, 08:55 PM   #2
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Old 04-29-05, 09:11 PM   #3
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intro is good I liked it. quality isnt too good, but not the worst. Flow chops up alot. rhymes are good.
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Old 04-29-05, 11:32 PM   #4
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thanks for tha feed. wow rv is officialy dead nowadays, i just realized this cuz i posted my first drop on this one site n already got like 4 replies n 20 sum views, i never realy post outta rv so this just kinda gave me some perspective on how this site is a rotting corpse
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Old 04-30-05, 02:28 AM   #5
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beat is pretty good, quality on the vocals needs to be better...it just ruins the song, i can tell what you were talking about with the in and out effect, delivery was pretty good, flow was aiight...it seemed off only on a couple parts. i was feelin the lyrics for the most part cause it seemed like the type of song i would write haha. but its too short, i hope you plan on makin it longer. if you fixed the vocals and made it longer i would probably listen to it
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Old 04-30-05, 10:38 AM   #6
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Since you always leave me feedback, I guess it's about time I return the favor.

I'm feeling it.....wish it wasn't so short though. I think your shit was a little messed up with the effects on your vocals, but that can be fixed pretty easily. I think your flow was a little shakey in the beginning, but then when the chorus kicked in, it was tight......then it ended. I was left wanting a second verse or something. Anyway.....hit me up with that beat and I'll add a verse.....lol.
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Old 04-30-05, 10:58 AM   #7
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Beat is doep ass fuck..hook nice I felt this entire song...flow was good lyrics showed emotion which was very good...Nice shit
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Old 04-30-05, 05:58 PM   #8
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^ you enygma, i been tryin to throw down wit u for a minute now. get at me on aim or e mail n ill getchu that beat, ima redo my verse to up the quality n c if it can go on my mixtape. get at me tho nyg...

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Old 05-02-05, 11:01 AM   #9
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that sound FX really fucked up this lil track ..but nonetheless lyrics and concept are real good..just need better Eq'ing my aim's NeWYorKenMC send me ya raw vocals and i'll spot you on some better mixin iight..one more thing that i think might make it sound better is if you do some track adlibs like hypin the chorus up..or if not just send ya vocals and i'll give ya a hand 1ne..
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Old 05-02-05, 05:02 PM   #11
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i liked the quality
dope ass beat,u know how to choose beats
Nice flow
i like your voice man
ur ma fav on rv for audio
Not your best quality tho
VERY DOPE TRACK

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Old 05-02-05, 05:51 PM   #12
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Yo kid that flow was fucked. The lyrics were alright, but quality aside, u sounded like a bitch.
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Old 05-03-05, 02:35 PM   #13
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who tha fuck is this kid ^^^ never heard of u in my life so i dont realy give a fvck what u gotta say... fvckin weak ass text heads....n e ways, good look sense, ima redo this track eventualy n ill get at u if i need my vocals EQ'd thanks alot peeps!
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Old 05-03-05, 03:02 PM   #14
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yeaaaaaaaaaaa im feelin dis track is up dere wid spekerz blow

beat is dopeness....u come in nice and hard str8 spittin...i like ur voice u got a unique voice..lyrically its average, nuttin spectacular, ur flow is flawless..quality aint that bad, i aint caught that quality issue u talkin bout...i like the switch in tempo n mood when ur voice gets louder as the beat changes slightly, its a dope transition, got ma hed boppin, i liked the line: "makin a change till ma chest collapses"..keep em comin, u one of the nicer cats on Rv at the moment

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Old 05-03-05, 04:51 PM   #15
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^ word good to c im gettin recognition u aint too bad urself. btw i found out how to save my accapellas in a high quality format so i went thru n uploaded this new version that is better quality wise... thanks for all tha feed ppl's!!!
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