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This was an iight drop..
You had nice flow.. and thats what made your verse
really good ..feeling was good ,
you had nice imagery, and some good wordplay,
and vocab ..Structure was okay, next time
try to match up your bars, and not make a line longer then then others..
Nice concept, good topic ..Alittle short , could have been alittle longer,
felt it could have made it alittle better..overall keep it up .
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