I’m lost and trapped within the madness
of clashin passions fastened actions of opposable factions
Relaxing, fashion of sensual combatants
Let the beat climax n that’s when I’m back in
droppin facts In Jackson knows no holding back kid
Penetrating beats with no prophylactics
shorty that’s when I’m on some folding back shit
Only backwards n leave the instrumental holding the mattress
I’m used to seeing Tracks in the suit known as birthday
Spit game in the worse way and hit em on the 1st day
I speak of goddesses, You cant deliver you’ll fall
I treat the Music like a princess and give her my all
Hand her my soul and listen as the magic unfolds
I fly towards greatness whenever she has the controls
Down I will go on her bass line fathoms below
Licking the treble in tempo to manage the flow
Delivery on time like postals Inserting my vocal
The speaker’s her womb I leave her juicing loco
But of course though, I’m attracted to smash hits
Fact is I make love to tracks n off spring Classics

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lol, crazy, nice flow in this, inners were everwhere...
this was nice, complexity was good, imagery was mad koo,.
a little short but thats aight, metas n bar structure was
very good, shit gets ya thinkin, nice work fam..........

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

upping for fed back!

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Im A Throwback

upp
stop sleepin

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Damn....this was ill

But of course though, I’m attracted to smash hits
Fact is I make love to tracks n off spring Classics

^^^really feelin this shit....drop...gotta be a 10/10

Finally somebody rappin about different shit...keep em comin

damn, mad hot
flow was good, vocab was great
shit was straight fire

that was so mad skill right there, very complex
liked the whole metaphoric rhyme scheme
mad props i give it a 10/10
keep it up it definetly gets your mind thinking
oh yeah the word play was phenominal...........

haha, shit was really ill calm, liked how you incorporated music into it, and shit, and used dope meta's, flow was fucking hot like your mother, good imagery and decent vocab, you got a great imagination, nice drop famn, props.. rtf on my open mic, Metaphorically Speaking, or leave feed on it in poetic scriptures

Thanx fam... i actually didnt think i was gon get any love on this one. lol

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great drop...it's nice to see a emcee use an extended metaphor. at first i didn't get it but afta i read through it again it really made sense. i dont know how anybody could sleep on dis 1. 9/10.....nominate dis 4 OM of tha month on tha real. stay up & rtf.1.

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do i need a fuckin sig?

thanks fam...
the feed is much appreciated

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thanx fam uppinfor more feed

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