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Old 05-01-05, 06:50 PM   #21
Ka.Ze
Do.Pe
 
Posts: 36
This was feedback posted for Stanza

IP:

im leaving feedback since i dont have 200 posts...


im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch


vs

You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End


Big C- u have potential. but u need to work on
ur disses and wordplay. like the wilson punch
it couldh have been reworded to have a greater effect
and u wasnt really dissin ur opponents man.
any elevate

Stanza- decent verse. opener was prolly the best.
u was straight forward and had mediocore wordplay.
but it was enough to win.

v/stanza

RTF.
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