Evolution
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
ight imma break this down...
MaD_KnighT...
Fuck me we all know dat ur rhymes are so unstable......
Now its time 2 break ur legs in 2 and turn da table.......
^^ decent opener couldav been worded better 6/10
To break me is in-possible you wasting lifes pure n simple breath.....
Cuz meta's get sent to ya sooner than kids getting into oy chest!....
^^nice wordplay and decent creativity... 7/10
You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid
^^ decent closure goot meta 7/10
overall u had a solid verse but maybe you should try to word your punches better so they have more effect other than that its ight... 21/30
Verbal...
Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
^^ good first line but i aint feelin the second line... 5/10
Mad Knight? Yeah right..........this clown's a Jester, it's settled..
I'll rip up this fag's heart faster than high cholesterol levels...
^^ decent punch here... 8/10
Rapping's not your thing.....drop the mic and quit fakin...
Cuz you're an underground rapper....in terms of elevation..
^^ bad closure bad rhyme and played concept... 5/10
overall i thought you couldav came harder u had a dcent bar buts thats all u had... you need to stay consistant in your battles other than that everything else was ight... 18/30
v/ MaD_KnighT... having a more solid verse, better strucutre and better punches.... stay up pz.
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