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Old 05-02-05, 05:48 PM   #30
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This was feedback posted for Big City

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Stanza: Short verse, flow was cool, punches were meh. Nothing had me laughing. Just some close to okay meta's. Quotables:

No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits

Vs.

Big City: Flow was alright too, punches were the same like his, just meh. Longer verse but you still didnt have anything great. Meta's were okay. Quotables:

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial

V/ Big City for having wittier punches.
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