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IP:
This was an iight drop.. Lol you had a couple fillers
some nice bars , the best i saw was:
she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet
she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret
but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream
but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams"
LOL im loving it , this was dope
You had some nice wordplay , some okay vocab
I felt you could have choosen your words alittle better
Maybe some harder punchlines.. overall it was a good drop
Both had okay structure , pretty decent corus
keep it up and drop a link or this will be CLOSED
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