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Old 05-03-05, 06:54 PM   #5
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Voted For: Big City

stanaz:
nice verse, good flow an punches, effective personals too
ya verse was short n sweet, straight ta the point

No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
^^^
that second line is so fuckin basic but it had me like ''oooh'' haha, good shit!!
^^
that was the highlight of the battle

im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
^^^
i like the idea of the wilson wordplay, but it was very uneffective for a battle, maybe could of worded it better ta have more effect an turned it into a personal, ya feel me?

city:
ya closer was stretched, rest of the verse had some good flow too it, punches were good, but on some occassions u bigged yourself up alot, like in the bar i copied above ^^^

on the whole stanza had the much shorter verse but remained on point throughtout, where as big city had some good stuff an very creative, but in a battle some shit was not effective because of the self glory an not personal disses on stanza
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