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Old 05-07-05, 12:27 PM   #7
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confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
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THIS IS NOT A PUNCH..MORE SELF/GLORY 1/10
he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential
^^
SELF GORY...BUT GUD RHYME! 2/10
2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****
^^
BETTER..BUT STILL..3/10
callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'
^^KINDA PUNCH..3/10

B-GURL..YA STRUCTURE WAS GOOD..FLOWED WELL AND U HAD NICE VOCAB.#
BUT PROBLEM IS ALL THATS LIKE ONLY 15-20% OF A GOOD VERSE THE REST IS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES & PERSONALS WHICH U HAD NONE.
YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO DISS YA OPPONENT.
YOU DID WELL TO RHYME ALL THOSE WORDS THO PROPS..BUT IT ISNT NESSACARY.

U CUDA SAID SUMTHIN LIKE

this guy will neva be sick..coz hes so non "influ"ential..
Ya rhymes are like ya bank balance..you no "cred"ential..

its all about how u word stuff..jus get more creative
see how i usued influ as a meta for influenza/sickness
and cred ential as credits i.e money..

jus upp ya game gurl

confidential

u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....
^^gud personal...6/10

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*
hmmmm..5/10

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape
^^lol...decent 6/10
u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*
^^^like it nice bar 7/10
Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056
^^lol.yup decent personal wit da link as proof 6/10
N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....
^^^ok closer 5/10

yeh...gud drop confidential...basically murdered bgurl wit punches and creativity..keep it upp

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