Voted For: confidential



yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
^^OK punch,didn't flow too well
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
^^again,nice punch...didn't flow
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
^^not feelin this one,didn't hit hard and didn't flow
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
^^nice,prob. the best line ya had.flow was off a bit
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
^^weak
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth BITCH
^^nice closer,unlike the rest...this line actuaaly flowed

Conclusion-U need to flow son.Try to trim down ya lines a bit.u punches were Ok,ya got some creativity in there as well.Not saying they are the best in the world,but flow hurt ya in this battle.

*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*
^^nah..weak ass punch
*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*
6^nope....don't just state shit...use wordplay and metas so u indirectly say it.I dun kno..it hard to explain.read tutorials
*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*
^^This wat I'm talkin bout.Real nice punch
*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*
^^wat?weak
*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
*^^ again...weak man
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
^^Ok,ya already got a mama joke in there,1 is enough.
*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*
^^U had a decent opener,punchline itself didssapionted

Conclusion-Like I said ,don't state stuff...use wordplay and metas.Indirectly say it.U had a better flow then the other guy..I'll give ya that.But ya punchlines were too simple,like a begginer does it.

Vote-Confidential