Voted For: Black Queen
BLACK QUEEN
Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees
you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty
^^seemed a lil forced to rhyme..not a great punch 4/10
You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid
i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice
^^lil forced to rhyme again...lil beta punch 5/10
and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions
And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions
^^decent bar...decent punch 6/10
and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie
i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony
^^gud wordplay..but not a great punch 5/10
so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead
watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head
^^o.k closer..5/10
overall...25/50...50%...picked up a lil towards the end...
you could do with uppin your creativitie..few gud concepts but the way u worded em let u down, also couple bars seemed a bit forced to rhyme
YOUNG BLAZE
When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble”
Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles
^^wordplay impressive...but i felt this was a lil self glory...5/10
Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins
Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”….
^^not really a diss...more a statement 4/10
Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me…
yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury)
^^again gud wordplay..but this isnt a punch or diss..4/10
Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches.
Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s….
^^lovin the wordplay again...for that ive gotta give u 6/10..but still not really a diss..upp ya personals
Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless…
U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….
^^nah...great wordplay,but more self-glory that a direct punch..4/10
overall...23/50...
close battle...i really wanted to go with blaze coz u got sum sick wordplay...but i cudnt spot a direct punch at your opponent, ya lines were kinda self glory or statements, neither of u had personals..but black queens hit were more directed at her opponent..
vote black queen..no hate
RETURN AN HONEST ONE BOTH Y`ALL
PLEEEEEEEZ
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