ya this was a solid fuck piece flow fell off in one place,
"nothin but dirty n rough" but other then that the concept was aight
but i did feel you didnt set a good approach from beginning to end
you summed up your topic like 5 times in seperate bars, it was koo
dont get me wrong but you couldve made it alot more interestin than
just dragging on the fact that you fuck'em then dump'em, get me?..
closer was koo, good ending, alot of ya bars n ryhme scheme were proper
vocab couldve been up'd a little more thou, all in all, nice drop..
especially if it was a free key n you didnt fly back n change a bunch of shit..
werd, thats feedback, enjoy, pz
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*goes back to ll thread n tells him it was aight*

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!