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IP:
This was a pretty nice piece..
I was really feelin it one of your best drops..
Your flow was good, your structure
was off alittle , and i think you should work
on lining up your bars, wordplay and vocan ,
were decent felt you should use alittle more complexity..
try to use deeper words, nice imagery , and emotions
going into the peice.. keep it up
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