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Sorry not feeling it at all, could have been alot better
fix your structure , and use better
wordplay and vocab, use deepre words
and expand your vocab , try not use simple words
alittle to simple for me ,.. Flow was okay , alittle off..
Use better punchlines , and fix your style, just
elevate use better punchlines ,.. and learn the basics
keep it up drop a link!or you know what
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