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Old 05-11-05, 05:34 PM   #1
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Ya'll Cant Fuck Wit Us

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Chea niggaz Its Killa Kid But I Got MY Old Nigga Here Wit Me
Tha One Mufuckaz Sho Ya How We Do Ya Heard Me




* Tha One*
I used to be tha nigga errbody talked about
wit tha pen n a pad errone used ta doubt
my talent got damnit look at me now
im Tha One tha last Prince of tha Souf
u talkin bout barz fuck spittin barz i drop bombs
niggaz start talkin shit wit they niggaz comes
man get tha fuck out my face u cant handle me dude
nigga show u man u dont want it dude
cuz Tha One alwayz ben known to ride wit tha tool
n i feel when it come to rappin i can spit wit no vocab n niggaz still feel real
most of well let me say a large percent of these keepin it real niggaz is fraudglent
ya'll niggaz said i was fake tha way i came out like Mr. Bentley ya'll got me bent
had my back to tha wall thought u had me pented
hell naw mufucka Tha One is here i aint tha one ta lie or give u fasle actusations
Me and Killa Kid takin ova tha nation


*Killa Kid*
Wit these freestyle flowz
i got game so i pull me a 10/10 hoe
ya niggaz know ya'll cant touch tha flow
so much Flames ya'll can call me drago *What Up Kin Folk*
then to Ax Dawg n u fuck wit me then ima wack ya dawg
but he was tha leader of tha old team still wonderin how he came up wit sheep
niggaz hated me sayin that i was to weak
then i begin to open my mouf then speak
spittin big words that i cant spell
big fuck it i can say em n my plan was to give em hell
ya'll shoulda nigga spoke on my name or ever tha crew
mufucka get even what im bout ta do
mufucka what it do its killa Paul Wall ya Fake ass stealin my shit
Now i see why Rasaq talkin bout u bitch
how u tryin to be gangsta when at first u was readin tha Bible
then hollin out Peter was ya Idol
i ben gon for a while then i see Dkie Jones blow up
can Believe this Shit he Really Slow dats why his song Not Screwed Up
n To Micheal Watts If I see u ima bitch slap ya ass
For sayin that shit bout Dj Screw when he tha one That Tought Ya Ass
O. G Ron C Used ta do all ya choppin
now ima ride by Swisha House N have ya Heartbeat Stoppin
so much anger at these niggaz for turnin they back
Its Prince Koopa Color Changin Mufuckin Click Clack




Outro: Tha Song Was Ya'll Cant Fuck Wit Us
shit I Got Side Tracked Wit My Sista Told Me To Listen To A Mike Jones Song While I Was Doin This Shit

Mike Jones Carrer Finna Die Shit Wait Till King Koopa Get in Tha Mainstream
Chamillionaire Killa Kid Rasaq Young Ro 50/50 Lil Twin O.G Ron C Color Changin Click Baby


Paul Wall U Fakin U Aint From Souf Lee Evia Nigga When U First Started Rappin U Was Claimin Tha North Side Of Houston Pain N Partical Records Fuck Ya'll Niggaz
Chamillionaire Killa Kid Aka Tha Koopaz

Bitch Play Wit It Im Comin Soon Wit My New Shit



Holla Back Sick Of Fake Niggaz
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Old 05-11-05, 05:52 PM   #2
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chamillionaire aint gonna get into mainstream...
...he already rejected them once
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Old 05-11-05, 09:16 PM   #3
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Souf-ern style rap, looks wack on the internet.

The flow wasnt great, not many punchlines, no meaning, no emotions,.

This is like the 300th song called "yall cant fuck with us, dont fuck with us, or yall dont wanna fuck with us"

Umm what was good about this

i ben gon for a while then i see Dkie Jones blow up
can Believe this Shit he Really Slow dats why his song Not Screwed Up

i dont get the 2nd line, but it sounded pretty sick when i said it in my head.


keep uppin kid, dont hate honesty
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Old 05-11-05, 11:00 PM   #4
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Sorry not feeling it at all, could have been alot better
fix your structure , and use better
wordplay and vocab, use deepre words
and expand your vocab , try not use simple words
alittle to simple for me ,.. Flow was okay , alittle off..
Use better punchlines , and fix your style, just
elevate use better punchlines ,.. and learn the basics
keep it up drop a link!or you know what
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