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Light Weight
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Originally Posted by Bonecollector
This was a pretty nice piece..
I was really feelin it one of your best drops..
Your flow was good, your structure
was off alittle , and i think you should work
on lining up your bars, wordplay and vocan ,
were decent felt you should use alittle more complexity..
try to use deeper words, nice imagery , and emotions
going into the peice.. keep it up
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Fuck what he talkin this shit was hot!!
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1
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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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