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Old 05-16-05, 07:08 PM   #14
Paranoid
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i like this piece long time no see yo cats ive been on rb so much after being banned but anyway good piece nice stucture good flow rhyme scheme was a little better for both of yall. vocabulary was pretty good as well and the imagery was pretty good on point.

rtf in my om Morbid Thoughts 1

its parallel
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