Good:::

It Goes Click & Spark..........Dislocates Your Blood From Hearts
Tears Ya Limbs Apart...........Disects Lungs Until Breathin Stops
^^^^good startin.. but I didn't found a way Hearts & Stops rhymed

Blast Quick, Take Away Lives.........Slash Thru You Like Knives
Take Husbands From Wives, 'Left-Sex'....Its 'Fuckin You Right'!
^^^^damn, good line

Cold.......Da Gat Shivers, Sensin Ya Nerve Like Visable Feelings
Infectin Ya Hearin, 'MALE HUNGER'....Ya Blood Is Its 'Meal-Man'
^^^^ not that good

Brains Hittin Ceilings, Paused Motions........As Death Is Nearing
Gunmen Fearing..............'RAIN SHOTS' Like 'Druken-Tearing'!
^^^^ Good, good... the best in ur rap

Insides? Non-Existent.........Fake-Drops? No, Ya Falls-Realistic
Hit Make Ya Lip-Stick, Den DUMP-FAST Shots Like Quick-Shits
^^^^hmmm good

Necks Split, Heads Drip & 'Hand' Out Blood Like ORGAN GRIPS
When Da Guns Raise, In A Flash Like Super-Heros..Lifes Extinct
^^^^ Perfect Closing

8.7/10
very good man.... congrats

RTF please

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