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05-16-05, 07:53 PM
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::...When The Guns Raise...::
IP: 2D5F 05FA
Shit, When The Guns Raise........ It Goes Click & Spark..........Dislocates Your Blood From Hearts Tears Ya Limbs Apart...........Disects Lungs Until Breathin Stops Blast Quick, Take Away Lives.........Slash Thru You Like Knives Take Husbands From Wives, 'Left-Sex'....Its 'Fuckin You Right'! Cold.......Da Gat Shivers, Sensin Ya Nerve Like Visable Feelings Infectin Ya Hearin, 'MALE HUNGER'....Ya Blood Is Its 'Meal-Man' Brains Hittin Ceilings, Paused Motions........As Death Is Nearing Gunmen Fearing..............'RAIN SHOTS' Like 'Druken-Tearing'! Insides? Non-Existent.........Fake-Drops? No, Ya Falls-Realistic Hit Make Ya Lip-Stick, Den DUMP-FAST Shots Like Quick-Shits Necks Split, Heads Drip & 'Hand' Out Blood Like ORGAN GRIPS When Da Guns Raise, In A Flash Like Super-Heros..Lifes Extinct (1) Last Line...FLASH Is A Superhero...If You Was Lost $cream At Me...
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05-16-05, 08:00 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 3240 794D
yo Man it Was Alright It A Simple Flow But u Can spit better than that cuz but it had no scheme to it but it was alright!>>7/10
i need some uppin on my Ghost Freestyle (OM) read n tell me whatcha think holla atcha boy
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05-16-05, 09:05 PM
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IP: 2D5F 05FA
Jeah.............Imma Peep Dat Namean..............Uppin
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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05-16-05, 09:53 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
Good:::
It Goes Click & Spark..........Dislocates Your Blood From Hearts Tears Ya Limbs Apart...........Disects Lungs Until Breathin Stops ^^^^good startin.. but I didn't found a way Hearts & Stops rhymed Blast Quick, Take Away Lives.........Slash Thru You Like Knives Take Husbands From Wives, 'Left-Sex'....Its 'Fuckin You Right'! ^^^^damn, good line Cold.......Da Gat Shivers, Sensin Ya Nerve Like Visable Feelings Infectin Ya Hearin, 'MALE HUNGER'....Ya Blood Is Its 'Meal-Man' ^^^^ not that good Brains Hittin Ceilings, Paused Motions........As Death Is Nearing Gunmen Fearing..............'RAIN SHOTS' Like 'Druken-Tearing'! ^^^^ Good, good... the best in ur rap Insides? Non-Existent.........Fake-Drops? No, Ya Falls-Realistic Hit Make Ya Lip-Stick, Den DUMP-FAST Shots Like Quick-Shits ^^^^hmmm good Necks Split, Heads Drip & 'Hand' Out Blood Like ORGAN GRIPS When Da Guns Raise, In A Flash Like Super-Heros..Lifes Extinct ^^^^ Perfect Closing 8.7/10 very good man.... congrats RTF please
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05-16-05, 10:40 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
This was pretty decent ,i wasnt feelin how short it was
structure was on point , nice flow Wordplay and vocab were decent , alittle simplicit.. You had some nice bars, good solid punches.. Overall this was a pretty decent drop..nothing more i could say it was just alittle short for me ..keep it up Drop a link or this will be closed
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05-17-05, 07:32 AM
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...inspires fear.
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IP: 508E 2DA7
Sounds like you study anatomy.
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05-17-05, 05:14 PM
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IP: 271C 7675
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191207
Good Looks @ Bone & Ax...................WTH @ Omnivision, Y You Say That?
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05-17-05, 05:18 PM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 6804 D41F
nice drop cant be mad at this good creativity and shit vocab was good flow was pretty good structre almost perfect mad props for this piece 8/10
please return the favor in my open mic link in my sig
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05-17-05, 05:24 PM
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Metropolis
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IP: B52C 6258
this was ok, good flow and vocab in this shit, nah mean. work on ya punches a lil more, tho. you got multies down and structure and shit. i give it a 7/10 cuz ya really had no topic n ya rhyme scheme was a lil messed up, but overall it was a a solid drop wit some hot bars, nah mean..1...
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05-17-05, 05:30 PM
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IP: 271C 7675
Jeah I Just Thought About Killin Lol........& Ran Wit Dat Idea........Nothin Serious I Knew It Wasnt Da Best But Hey.......Good Looks
UPPIN
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05-18-05, 05:40 PM
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IP: 4E19 84AF
Jeah..............UPPIN This...................Stop Lookin If You Have Nothin 2 Say!
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"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!" |
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