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Old 05-17-05, 05:24 PM   #9
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this was ok, good flow and vocab in this shit, nah mean. work on ya punches a lil more, tho. you got multies down and structure and shit. i give it a 7/10 cuz ya really had no topic n ya rhyme scheme was a lil messed up, but overall it was a a solid drop wit some hot bars, nah mean..1...
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