This was probly the best track I've heard from you yet, the beat meshed well w/ your voice, I just get caught up on some of your lines, cuz you rush a word or two and it gets tough to stay with you throughout it all... i think if you spent a little more time rehearsing this, it would be a better peice, I know you were going for the emotion and not a crazy flow or anything, but there were spots where it was sloppy and that hurts you... but like I said, probly one of the best tracks I've heard from you, just keep working and droppin that feedback, its appreciated..1

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190717

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