|
|
IP:
[color=Green] This was a pretty good drop..
Structure was the only thing that killed it ,..
made the reader not want to read it , lines were
all over the place..hard to read.. but i got through it..
You had some nice punchlines.. some were okay
some were really good , and thought out..
i feel you should elevate on your structure match up your bars
and not use '' blah"" everyone just write it .. with out trying
to dress up a verse.. feel me
ps: Drop a link or this will be closed
and nice for quoting me!
__________________
The Competition
|